One word to save me

by SKhayt   Feb 9, 2007


My smile used to hide the pain
But now my smile slowly fades away
My sorrows surface once again
Sitting quietly by myself again for the third day

Once I was the girl laughing and smiling
But now I'm the silent one that everyone passes by
No one realizes I am slowly dying
Do they even notice the silent tears I cry?

I see that one soul that notices me
The one who could help me
All I would need is just one word dear sister
Hello

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow this poem is very sad and was well written i absolutely love it :):)
    i like the way u contrast the was and now and the flow was good
    it was short but well written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is very good + It has a Nice flow =]

    Great job ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Oh christ!....such a sweet poem....very well write..it prtrays pain and it's soo touching...very powerful words..hope this is not your true thoughts-if it is then:on a personal basis..a request-never give hope.don't let your smile fade away..Love ya hun!
    kp up de good work!..5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

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