Oh christ!....such a sweet poem....very well write..it prtrays pain and it's soo touching...very powerful words..hope this is not your true thoughts-if it is then:on a personal basis..a request-never give hope.don't let your smile fade away..Love ya hun!
kp up de good work!..5/5!
xxPoojaxx

This poem is very good + It has a Nice flow =]

Great job ^^

Wow this poem is very sad and was well written i absolutely love it :):)
i like the way u contrast the was and now and the flow was good
it was short but well written
5/5