by Lenny Feb 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
By day |
by Kaitlyn
Gahhwooahh. |
by Drew Gold
I loved the "like clouds/do rain" and "and leaves/its stain" -- awesome format, really worked well. Kinda disappointed at the end. Maybe because the word "denial", but there's also something else, i think, that doesn't quite add up with the rest of the poem. really goodjob th0 |