I loved the "like clouds/do rain" and "and leaves/its stain" -- awesome format, really worked well. Kinda disappointed at the end. Maybe because the word "denial", but there's also something else, i think, that doesn't quite add up with the rest of the poem. really goodjob th0

Gahhwooahh.
i really like the format of this poem.
haha, its different to what i've read, but i really like it, because its got real good flow.
kaitlynx.