Missin' You

by MaSkEdSoUl   Feb 9, 2007


Roses are red,
Violets are too.
I miss you
& you probably do too.

You're in my mind,
You're in my thoughts,
You're in my room,
You're in the street.

Wherever I go,
Whatever I think,
Whatever I do,
I think of you.

It won't stop,
No it wont.
I love you too much,
To let you go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is another sweet poem. I know I can relate a lot to this poem. Well Done 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Okay, its alright the mood was kind of playfull in my mind, which makes this work. But in the reality of poetry, your rhythm.... you didnt seem to have one. Well maybe if you go by the classic roses are red and violets are blue but they are completely interupted by your lack of rhymes. They typically work together. But the thought is good, and it has potential. (I am not trying to be mean at all dont get the wrong idea, I jist give honest opinions) and i know you can prolly do allot better. So I am not judging you on this particular piece. Peace

    ~skittz

  • 17 years ago

    by black_hearted_lover

    This is really cute

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