This is really cute

Okay, its alright the mood was kind of playfull in my mind, which makes this work. But in the reality of poetry, your rhythm.... you didnt seem to have one. Well maybe if you go by the classic roses are red and violets are blue but they are completely interupted by your lack of rhymes. They typically work together. But the thought is good, and it has potential. (I am not trying to be mean at all dont get the wrong idea, I jist give honest opinions) and i know you can prolly do allot better. So I am not judging you on this particular piece. Peace

~skittz

This is another sweet poem. I know I can relate a lot to this poem. Well Done 5/5

Kalee