Youre angel

by firexdancer   Feb 9, 2007


Remember me,
when the blade slides deep,
and tears ripple the water,
because i'll never forget.
forgive me,
if i was wrong,
and the blood is tainted
because i forgave you
dream of me,
when a feather falls onto your pillow
of pure black
because i am your angel

i really need comments on this, cause i want to know how it is
luv gabriella

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    It was short and sweet. An easy and enjoyable read. Keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written and you (again) bring great joy to me as i read your poems this poem is sad and it is rare but still it is packed with emotion and short to the point great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    I loved it!

    Laura
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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I liked this word for word. It's deep and streams emotion. Wonderful read! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I like the way it sounds i like it i wouldnt change it i would write another one to get what you wanted but i would keep this one

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