I like the way it sounds i like it i wouldnt change it i would write another one to get what you wanted but i would keep this one

I liked this word for word. It's deep and streams emotion. Wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

I loved it!

Laura
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Well written and you (again) bring great joy to me as i read your poems this poem is sad and it is rare but still it is packed with emotion and short to the point great job

It was short and sweet. An easy and enjoyable read. Keep up the great work.