Shiny shiny razor blade

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Feb 9, 2007


Shiny shiny razor blade
How I wonder why this is
Below the world
Like a corpse in the grave

Bloody bloody razor blade
How I wonder how this feels
When daylight is gone
When nothing shines above you

Shine shine all the nightlong
Bloody bloody yes you are
How I wonder how you are

Im a traveler of the dark
Thanks to you for your shiny spark
I could never see my way
With out your twinkle
Twinkle twinkle razor blade
How I wonder how to stop

i wrote this along with many others a year and a half ago when i hit my rock bottom

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Marshall

    This one was unique..usually i like rhyming poems more..but this one was good. Kinda mysterious but revealing..i dunno...although cutting isnt good for you...this poem was good, great job.

    David Marshall

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Great job! definitly a 5/5! the flow is poem is nice and the strucutre is unique.. the idea of the poem is cliche but the descriptions are good.. also you spelled razsor wrong in the title its RAZOR not "razsor"

  • 18 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is good,
    this part is my favorite
    "Twinkle twinkle razor blade
    How I wonder how to stop"
    i will do the rest, just not right now.
    luv gabriella

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