This is good,
this part is my favorite
"Twinkle twinkle razor blade
How I wonder how to stop"
i will do the rest, just not right now.
luv gabriella

Great job! definitly a 5/5! the flow is poem is nice and the strucutre is unique.. the idea of the poem is cliche but the descriptions are good.. also you spelled razsor wrong in the title its RAZOR not "razsor"

This one was unique..usually i like rhyming poems more..but this one was good. Kinda mysterious but revealing..i dunno...although cutting isnt good for you...this poem was good, great job.

David Marshall