This was really effective and ur simple imagery was so powerful, although from the first few lines i knew the ending of this poem b/c there are so many like this, urs was a really good one, well done

Wow I really liked this poem, especially the rhythm it carried in every line and it was soo simple yet deep meaning, good job ;). Plz feel free to read any of my poems and comment plz, thanku :).

I loved it :):):)

it make me feel somethin inside girl you know how to effect your readrs :):)..

keep on:):) the goooood work:):)