OMG wonderful poem u express urself so well keep up the good work!!!!
U describe the pain so well its as if i am there with you keep up the good work

Thats a really cute poem ... i like it kinda describes how i have felt before..

This one is really good i like how you tie everything together

Wow, kinda of a twisted love story, im wondering if its true......i hope everythings ok for you and thsoe involved

monks

Loved the story line in this piece. The flow was amazing.

Well written.