by John Long Feb 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
That cut glass voice purring down the line |
Such an enchanting temptress you write of. Although these types can be deliciously wicked there is always a message to heed from them. Yowza what a write. It was delicious in it's own sense of the word, you may not write often but when you do it is so powerful. I know I was lax in commenting as I remember this poem from before. So glad to read it again so as to comment on it. |
I really like this poem! I loved the way it rhymed! I do my poems kind of simmular to the form that you put yours in. Awsome job!!!!!!! |