I really like this poem! I loved the way it rhymed! I do my poems kind of simmular to the form that you put yours in. Awsome job!!!!!!!

Such an enchanting temptress you write of. Although these types can be deliciously wicked there is always a message to heed from them. Yowza what a write. It was delicious in it's own sense of the word, you may not write often but when you do it is so powerful. I know I was lax in commenting as I remember this poem from before. So glad to read it again so as to comment on it.
Thank you for sharing.
Kay