by Independence Forever Feb 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Wham! the young fighter takes another hit |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this..it flowed well throughout, imagery portrayed created very vivid pictures in my mind and the depth and emotion in this piece was wonderfully done. the only thing i didn't like to much was that you rhymed worried with worried..it just kinda threw the flow for me. awesome ending...powerful and hard hitting with an insanely great messag behind it. |