Comments : Choice

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Aido! That was brill!!!!
    My fav lines where "Her and another, locked
    In my locket, and
    Forever in my heart."
    I love the way you used "locket"
    so poetic... lovery!

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow! That was so awesome! I like your word usage and the way it flowed. Keep it up!