by FlawlesslyTarnished Feb 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I've got a heart |
by ALEX
Hmm.. you're right. Not exactly your best. The rhythm and rhyming is good, of course, but maybe try using more challenging vocab. Oh, this is an old one, so it's likely that you did anyways. Oh wells. I do like this poem. =] |