An entoxicating beauty

by Independence Forever   Feb 9, 2007


Standing to the side, a radiant beauty
so provacative, she has her own duty

a simple drink held in her hand
nothing strong just a simple, bland

her eyes twinkle, softly like the stars in outer space
so beautiful, you'd go through the hardest enduring race

she gives you a smile enough to make you melt
you would do anything for her, no matter the cards you're dealt

she slowly comes toward you and asks a dance
she is so breathtaking you feel like you're in a trance

the next day she's gone along with the rest of the party
but there's a phone number in your hand, you feel hardy

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    The rhyme has a wonderful beat in it, but that's just my opinion! That aside, Excellent job! 5/5