She Finally Whispered

by Colby   Feb 10, 2007


Mad that you screwed up
you look to see whats new
but really there is nothing
she doesnt know what shes putting you through,

You try to say
that you still love her
but she doesnt realize
its her that you prefer,

When you talk to her here and there
you look into her eyes
and you think shes everything
imagine you and her beyond the sunrise,

And just when
you think things are going right
you find out the unfortunate news
staying up and crying all night,

You decide that shes nothing
but really shes haunting you
shes stuck in your heart
threes nothing you can do,

You cant get over her
because everything she does
adds on to the love
threes no reason but because,

She keeps looking into your eyes
and you seem to melt
thinking that
its love you actually felt,

But you know this couldnt be true
because she already told you
it was over
and threes nothing you could do,

Next thing you know
your told your life could be done
no one seems to care
so your life has become undone,

Without her by your side
all those times before
you would of died off sooner
but this you seem to ignore,

Without waiting
you tell her you love her
she just walks away
your death she will confer,

You still dont care
that your about to die
its doesnt matter to anyone
and you ask yourself why,

No one noticed you
for who you really were
they all hated you but never showed
this you could just infer,

You lay there in bed
with your last moments arising
people start to walk in
you notice her in the room, you find this surprising,

She didnt know that
you were serious about dying
so she says she is sorry
you know she is lying,

Sadly you die
with no feelings moved
you pass on and see
that no one cared, seems your life has improved,

Your dead but yet no passed on
you follow your loved one
as you see her smiling
the pain she felt was close to none,

Later that night
you sit next to her on her bed
as she lays down
your look and pat her head,

You still love her
even though shes doesnt care
you know something will happen
as sadness comes, you are unaware,

You look back at her
she starts to cry
and she whispers ~I loved him~
you noticed no lie.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Good poem a bit long but good you are a great writer keep it up =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey that poem is magnificent colby.. it's so sad!! i hope ur ok.. 5/5