by Wings Of Flames Feb 10, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
Nail my wrists to the cross, |
by Taylor
I realized it says "I HATE YOU" when I was looking at the name. This poem has so much feeling, I can definitley see your point of view. I really have an infatuation for this poem, too. Beautiful. |
by Emma
Nice job i really liked it. lol i liked what u did with the title btw |
by Fsams
This is a good piece. I like the flow and your wordings. There is still need for improvement like all poems would have. But its really a good piece. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Creative title. Wonderful imagery, very painful. The vocab was nice, and the flow was awesome. 5/5. |
by Rachel RTVW
Deep dark powerful emotions in this piece. Graphic imagery. Although not my favorite genre, you have done a good job. |