Comments : White Star

  • 17 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    I suck at comments. You DONT suck at writing.

    More Lube,
    Matt

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This poem is dark n has a depth to it. what i liked was ur interesting use of vocabulary not just typical words. well done

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Wow i loved it...the first two verses kinda reminded me of harry potter haha

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Seronum

    Beautiful piece excellent writing style. Please keep up the good work 5/5