The saying goes
'2 wrongs don't make a Right '
but sayings are sayings
and some sayings are wrong

this part showed enormas ammounts of emotion. but did you use the word saying too much. but i loved it tho. 2 wrongs do not make a right.

5/5 David

Woah intense! I loved it I'm sry you got hurt...I once have too It's know fun but I'm glad you could stand up to it

This was also gorgeous, you write such amazing poems, i don't think you need to change it atall, it fits perfectly together like a puzzle.
5/5
luv gabriella

I lov e this poem it is amazing, it has a lot of emotion in it & i can relate to it a lot

Aw. This is so intense! Very powerful & deep. I'm sorry. I hope you're ok! But it's great that you're strong. A lot of people can relate to this, sadly. It flowed pretty well & nothing seemed forced. It had tons of emotions in it.. sadness & anger.. regret.

Beautifully penned, m'dear.

Bri [x]

Excellent poem, well written, you did a very good job on this one and it makes me proud of you, flow was great and the stanzas where excellent, you keep writing and I will read, .your friend Tracy dean 5/5 p.s I have a lot of child abuse and even put another on today , if you like to look at them , you don't have to comment or vote , hjust read em, thanks