No Other Way

by Tricky Daze   Feb 10, 2007


I don't know how to say
But I'm about to have a way

I know i walked away when you tried
To talk to me,hold my hand and touch my heart
Just hated you when you try to connect me
Knew you and mama weren't meant to be

But i wish i had understood what i know now
I would hug you and not let you go
Before I recognized my darkest mistakes and realities
Who will save me from dark skies
In my dreams i see you walking away
Just like you did that day

It's my deepest secret that i didn't admit
Who will kiss me goodnight
I want to go back to the days you were around me
When i was a little girl

It's so hard to fight alone in life
Who will protect me with tender wing
Everytime i break down i just think a thing
When i memorized the things in my life
There is just a big hole in my heart

You're near but far
I'm stuck at where i am
I can't run away,i just can't crumble
Who will save me from this marsh
I miss you
Because daddy,it's you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Again this is a great poem, but you forgot to capitalize the i's, but it is a very good poem laura, keep them comming!!! 5/5!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This was just a beautiful poem. so sweet and sad.

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    I liked this poem a lot and i can relate to it for my dad left when i was just a kid but ive gotten over it and i dont care anymore...anyway it was a good poem keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Girl, I feel the SAME way as you. Things will get better. 5/5.

    Happy Valentines Day!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I dislike commenting on truthful poems because I feel abliged to write sometimes undeserving praise, for the writing of common emotions. So, in all honesty I wasn't too keen on this.
    It was very emotional and touching, yes, but it wasn't all that new.
    I've read this type of thing too many times before; I'm sick of reapeating myself,
    "Don't" on the 2nd line of the 3rd stanza should be "not" for it to make sense, and it's "want to" in the 4th stanza.
    I said I'd be honest, so sorry.

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