This is a really good poem! it's bad that he left and isn't with youright now, but it's good that you love him so much. anyways... i wasn't exactly crazy about parts of it rhyming and others not... but i only just realized it reading over it again, so it doesn't change my opinion about the poem... great job!
5/5

Forever*Yours

The rhyming wasn't perfect and the flow wasn't all too good but the poem and message itself was very good.
You expressed yourself well.
love Tara-Kay
xxx

I dislike commenting on truthful poems because I feel abliged to write sometimes undeserving praise, for the writing of common emotions. So, in all honesty I wasn't too keen on this.
It was very emotional and touching, yes, but it wasn't all that new.
I've read this type of thing too many times before; I'm sick of reapeating myself,
"Don't" on the 2nd line of the 3rd stanza should be "not" for it to make sense, and it's "want to" in the 4th stanza.
I said I'd be honest, so sorry.

Girl, I feel the SAME way as you. Things will get better. 5/5.

Happy Valentines Day!

I liked this poem a lot and i can relate to it for my dad left when i was just a kid but ive gotten over it and i dont care anymore...anyway it was a good poem keep it up

This was just a beautiful poem. so sweet and sad.

Again this is a great poem, but you forgot to capitalize the i's, but it is a very good poem laura, keep them comming!!! 5/5!!!!