by Chelsey
Wait! Wait! Wait! |
by N J Thornton
Calm down. It's just a poem. Better to write about it, than do it. Plus, every teenage falls out with their parents, it's natural. You'll grow out of it. |
by N J Thornton
What can I say, I'm blunt. And we have a difference in opinion. |
by N J Thornton
Haha, cheers mate. |
by Darien
Very well done dhaval, you have conquered that mental state you were once in. Even though this one is still sad and you are feeling the effects, you will move on and you will be happy again. |
by Simon Hayes
Great piece Dhaval - A triumph over depression!! Great work :) |
I love the overall structure of this poem and the way it is written. Great work! |
There were only two things in this poem that I believe could be improved upon. |
by ReBecca
This was confusing to me, but well written. I am going to read Lunacy so I can understand it. |
by amelia
Beautifully written |