This is a good poem, I love how u ended it.

A little repetitive, not my favorite of yours, but still a very creative and interesting write. Good job!

~jas~

Awww, this is such a cute little poem!
I really liked the technique you used.
Even though it was an old poem, it's
still a really good one. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^__^)

Sweet and well written!...nice poem!..good wrk!
5/5!

I loved this, cute and funny. I loved this line...

"One day,
to be crazy,
One day,
to be like you,"

That is so me. lol.. A good write. =) 5/5
~Ally~

I like it a lot, you're a talented poet. Keep up the good work. It's a relief to have such excitement in a poem after reading sad ones all day =)