by MyDevotion Feb 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The rain calls my name |
by Tammie
This is an interesting poem. In the beginning I thought the rhyming seemed a bit forced, but it worked out in the end. You have such wide spread word choice which always makes poems so much more enjoyable to read. The ending was good, a strong ending to a great poem. 5/5 |