Loves Murderer

by MyDevotion   Feb 10, 2007


You say I've changed
and you say I've done it again
but what have I done
other than love you so deeply
and look after you as the tears came so freely
how can you say all of this to me
when we've come so far and say were so meant to be,

You act as if I'm the bad guy
committed a murder and flown without a trace
but I'm still here beside you
isn't that what you still want too
a future between us
or is this still a little game
that all girls tend to play
on boys who actually care about their name,

I stole your heart
you took mine so gently
I kept your's sacred
you took mine and made a mess with it
not one drop of blood was caught from its wreck
just a puddle on the floor on the love I worked so hard for
and gave it all up to you
and you proved me wrong and made me this fool,

I won't forget about you
I never had that thought cross my mind
but from time and time
you lose all of your cares
and turn your back and show me your hair
give me no reason to stay and stare
and try to make peace
but all of my trys are turned down
and shown to be weak,

Last tear from the bottle of our love fell out
and I dove to catch it from the hell of the cold floor
and I made it in time
but like the drop of a dime
a second one out of no where fell out
and every second had to count
and you erased me from this memory
as you let that love crash to the ground
and like a bad dream gone worse
those last seconds were torn
and this thorn in your life
was ripped from your side,

So don't worry about me
I only loved you as much as can be
I'll be fine this time
give me a moments peace to soak in my own life
every second
every moment
I tried to make last even longer
but you were always rushed
and throwing me out that door
the one of your time
but who cared about me or mine
no matter
I only wanted to love you
but that was a crime,

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww poor thing I loved the meaning to this poem! it was deep and I wish this girl or whatever would just love you back!!! I feel for you
    xoxo
    Kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Aliysia

    Mmm wut shud i say.. disz poem was beautiful kinda made me think bout me in mi relationship wit mi ex.. it was nice... u did good..
    (~*~* DIMPLESZ~*~*)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This poem tells such a story with great description too. You are very good with your words. I'm sorry that this girl has hurt you, I'm sure you don't deserve with how much you obviously love her. Great write though. 5/5

    Tammie