This poem tells such a story with great description too. You are very good with your words. I'm sorry that this girl has hurt you, I'm sure you don't deserve with how much you obviously love her. Great write though. 5/5

Tammie

Mmm wut shud i say.. disz poem was beautiful kinda made me think bout me in mi relationship wit mi ex.. it was nice... u did good..
(~*~* DIMPLESZ~*~*)

Aww poor thing I loved the meaning to this poem! it was deep and I wish this girl or whatever would just love you back!!! I feel for you
xoxo
Kaila