I liked that one alot, but the first line is kinda strange for me you know, but i'll let it slide 5/5

~Alicia

I agree with Alicia, the first line is kind of odd and uninteresting, but people who read this poem should continue reading it. It turns out to be a great poem. Keep up the good work, and 5/5

Um yeah sorry i agree but im gonna tell you how you may change it instead of
i cant take him
try
i cant handle him
just a suggestion but hey im not a great poet either lol

Okay I fixed the beginning. Thanks Alicia :)