I hope you plan on being a litteral writer or a poet because your words can change the vision of the world.continue pleasuring us with your charming words and always know your best.

Wow, its deep. Nice and simple, and it even says it all.

Yes,it is a really good poem.it touched me,and when i read it i felt like i was sayingh those words...well done:)

That was such a beautiful descriptive poem. well done.

A truly great piece. The flow and rhyme are flawless and I love the unique imagery and wording ('Breathing lyrics', 'blue notes', 'bleeding melodies'), not to mention the pure emotions it conjures upon reading it.Excellent.
Peace, Poetry & Power,
Gary J

I think Im like Liz, a bit lost of words about what to say about this poem - other than, I really liked it. It flowed so well and it just sat right with me - know what i mean?? :)

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

Loved it.
bravo!
keep up the amazing work.
=]

_tay

Honestly can't see how one could rate this any less than 5/5
im steadily getting more and more addicted to ur poetry....keep up the amazing work

Awesome, cool, sad yet, it leaves you with a lasting impression

Just so beautiful.......

Debbie sorry hard drive started screaming, it is kaput......so off line for a bit.....
I could scream too......poem still is sooo beautiful.........

That is a deep poem.. I like it...
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Wow wow. gr8 job... i just liked your poem tht was your goodwork. take care

Sooo beautiful.....you are

I love the smooth feelings the musical and illuminating lines approach me...

That is truly a poem, you really have a talent.
Keep it up. 5/5

Best Wishes
Wallace

Amazing! I don't have words... I really don't!

Amazin poem!

Good,i meant awesome,i rate u a

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