by Braeden Monks Feb 11, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
So why do you pour it out |
Very well spoken...I enjoyed reading this...you even rhymed a bit which is always a plus...you know how to speak your mind but not in such an offending way...great write!! |
by Mello193
This was very well written. I enjoyed reading this! I want to read more. |
You are a very wonderful writer. the way you word things is very good. i have a few comments though. have u even read the bible? u make a lot of statments that are very arrogant to what religion actually teaches. it seems to me like you have no idea what its about. thats just my opinion. i might be wrong. i really did like the poem though. 5/5 |
by aisyned
Great job!!! |
by Poetvoices
I fear most of your high ratings were based on content rather than quality. The rhythm, something that challenges us all, was off. It wasn't an easy read, and poems should flow. |