"Your own god is a lie
If you believe
Then why not die?"

Love it!

First time i read it kinda made little sense, But i read it a second time & it all came together.
Awesome poem!!!
5/5
Bek x

I fear you'll offend many with this write, but I guess that's the fun part.
Something I pondered yesterday on the bus, we complain society resembles a bunch of sheep, yet, if one of us tried to be a cow for example, we'd be disowned and thrown out of our field.
That's how religion works...we all want to be individual, yet if we should disagree with religion we're shunned and yelled at.
Yeah, very interesting. Thanks for sharing. You're brave lol.

Lol you're funny. And thanks.

Wow Braeden that was very interesting. i liked it! ''Show me the truth and I'll show you the lie'' i liek tht line the best. great jobb! keep it up hun =]
- Mel

I fear most of your high ratings were based on content rather than quality. The rhythm, something that challenges us all, was off. It wasn't an easy read, and poems should flow.
PV

Great job!!!

You are a very wonderful writer. the way you word things is very good. i have a few comments though. have u even read the bible? u make a lot of statments that are very arrogant to what religion actually teaches. it seems to me like you have no idea what its about. thats just my opinion. i might be wrong. i really did like the poem though. 5/5

This was very well written. I enjoyed reading this! I want to read more.

Very well spoken...I enjoyed reading this...you even rhymed a bit which is always a plus...you know how to speak your mind but not in such an offending way...great write!!