I liked the emotion you conveyed throughout this poem and still ur word choice is absolutely amazing... i liked how you wrote your first lines of each stanza... it made them more effective... lol. im sorry i write so much on commetns... lol. but yeah i do like this poem... 5/5 all the way!!

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Yeah, I've gotten worse at commenting. But oh well. I loved it anyway =P. Certaintly a better writer than poor old me. I also agree with A Fallen Angel "i liked how you wrote your first lines of each stanza... it made them more effective...".. Keep writing