This poem is good but yet kinda confused me because you kinda jumped around a little bit which to me its okay because it happens to me all the time with my mistakes. There's the last paragraph that should have Its not I.. example:

"He ran away after that! shouting,
Consider i a year present, so i can have anoter 365 days to think what to get you!!!!!"

should be

"he ran away after that! shouting, consider IT'S a year present, so i can have another 365 days to think what to get you"

but other then that you did a good job, i would say this would be a cute giggle poem which i did giggle so you did your job to get the job done. very nice.

keep up the good work. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I thought it was funny