I was like 'Ehh, the rhyming is kind of cliche..' But, that ending. BAM. I love it. It was so sweet and touching.. Very nicely done. I also loved the repition of the title. A wonderful write, my dear. |
by Jenni
Oh wow. this was wonderful. there is absolutely nothing about this poem that I would and could even try to change. The word choice was superb and the content was better. |
by vanessa
That is a very nice poem |
by lost soul
Woah.. amazing.. i love poetry too bad i cant rlly write it.. lol omg so good. |
by Deana
I feel like you just described my day today,snow and all,great rhymes nice flow ,good content. great job all round. |
by Angel Rae
Wow....you write really good stuff....you have TALENT.. |
by Jessica
This is a a very good poem..sad but very good |
by Yuna
I enjoyed reading this poem, and I say this with much truth. It reminded me of what winter is sometimes symbolized as. Sadness and memories when one think sit too cold to step outside.Great job! |
by amoxi
This was a deep and beautiful poem it shows a lot of emotion and i really enjoyed reading it 5/5 |
by Cherish
Another great amazing fabulous poem xxx |