by PoetryHeart Feb 11, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Imagine a world |
This is really good... a girl once wrote me a poem similar to this. its a shame we're not close anymore :( but anyway, amazing work. well done x |
by Espoirfailed
I have been reading ur poems since u joined this site and each one gets better, reading this one i felt almost proud lol, ur have progressed so much and from ur first poem to this one has been such a mssive change, ur writing is now full of talent, imagination and non forced rhymes :D |
by Fredy
"YOU may say i'm a dreamer but i'm not the only one". Jhon Lenon. |
by katrina
This is a really touching poem....an excellent story was told....5/5 from me...thanx |
I love your writing style. |