Great poem, i can picture everything you say. i love it!

This sounds like most of my friendship poems! Fabulous! 5/5

I love your writing style.
You're not the only one who doesn't have to just imagine.
keep writing! you're really good

This is a really touching poem....an excellent story was told....5/5 from me...thanx

"YOU may say i'm a dreamer but i'm not the only one". Jhon Lenon.

i'm with you dreaming, now let's make it a reality. 5/5

I have been reading ur poems since u joined this site and each one gets better, reading this one i felt almost proud lol, ur have progressed so much and from ur first poem to this one has been such a mssive change, ur writing is now full of talent, imagination and non forced rhymes :D

my fav bit was:

knowing no one will miss you
Because nobody cares

god, ur a good poet!!

This is really good... a girl once wrote me a poem similar to this. its a shame we're not close anymore :( but anyway, amazing work. well done x