This is really good. It has great imagery and a sad but very well written story. My only suggestion is to maybe work on the sructure... break it down in smaller lines. Overall it's a wonderful piece. 5/5

marcella

This really reminds me of my best friends. Really good poem. I can relate to it....Differently than you probably, but I can defiantly relate. Nice work

~Liana~

A wonderful tribute to your friends. Good job!