Very good poem! well done

Well written flow is good very heart felt and full of emotion, imigery and all is good 5/5

Wow! Thats great! Keep it up. Holla Back

Some spelling and grammar errors such as "foots(feet)" and "your night and me(mine) too."

Fix those and you'll be good to go!

This is soo good... love the way you expressed your feelings in the poem!!!
very well written .,,, keep it up!

Very nicely written, the flow as well as the structure was very good. The emotion within was good as well. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

I really enjoyed it. It was very passionate. The flow was pretty good. Overall good poem.

Make me a lot of hotter
^^ just one thing that I didn't understand.

But other then that it's great. I really don't care for love poems unless they are lost love but this is one that i enjoyed. Have a Happy Valentines Day!

It was good, but again the flow was off in a few parts, i had to reread some of it, it just wasn't smooth. you still have a talent in there, just check some of the poems over, you'll be a great writer some day.

I liked hw this poem showed and love it is well written keep it up

Thanks for the comment! Your poem is very sweet..nice job :)

Really i tried to undone that mistakes just after i submitted it,but it didn't work..it said that i editted my poem,but no changes,i tried so many times,i'm sorry but it isn't my mistake anymore

This is a very, very good poem, love it, just put a space between the commas and the words, i give it a 5/5!!!

Wow that was beautiful very romantic keep up the good work 5/5

Aww once again a sweet poem! Just realised that I didn't even think to write a Valentines day one.

Wow this was a wonderful poem it was very sweet and i like it a lot ur a good writer keep it up 5/5

Out of the ones you requested to be read, I felt that this one was stronger, I like how you don't feel the need to rhyme like most people do and I am also guilty of. Very romantic 5/5

This was such a great poem, it was really deep, i loved it .. dont stop !!

Very sweet. It's a beautiful poem. There's a few grammar mistakes, but it's still a great read. 5/5

marcella

Great emotion the flow is off but a good good good poem keep at it and work with it this could be great