She'll Love You Last

by *Charisma*   Feb 11, 2007


Who does she think she is,
To steal your heart away?
You were in the palm of my hand
Seems like yesterday.

I lost my voice for a moment
And lost my chance forever.
Daydreams are the only time
When we'll be together.

It's not fair on my heart,
Or on these tear-stained eyes.
If you would leave, I'd be okay
But I can see you day and night.

I'll watch a love meant for us
Grow with someone else.
I'll put my feelings back upon
Their too familiar shelf.

Time heals too slow for me.
Feels like I'm living in the past.
I'm the one who loved you first.
But she'll love you last.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This poem explains a lot about what I'm going through right now and it means a lot to read it ;)
    I loved it, I thought it was perfect with rhyming and rhythm.
    Perfect :)

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Why I haven`t read this before I do not know and why it isn`t rated a 5.0 boggles my mind ! This, in my opinion, is amazing. You write from the heart, and you write flawlessly, never underestimate your work, Dear.

    "I'll watch a love meant for us
    Grow with someone else.
    I'll put my feelings back upon
    Their too familiar shelf."

    ^^ WOW ! AMAZING.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    Your words are beautiful. I'm shocked that every poem I open of yours I fall in love with it. That doesnt happen to often for me. i dont add everyone to my favorites but u are a deffinite. Your work leaves me wanting to read them all which would take a while but would b time well spent.
    a fan of ur work
    <3
    L.C

  • 17 years ago

    by albert padilla

    This is a good poem, seems like there is alot of heart into this.
    Albert

  • 17 years ago

    by YourGirl&hearts;

    Wow you have a real gift!

    thanks for the comments! you are a really good poet :] xx

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