Aw. that was a really sweet poem. i feel it could flow a little better.

the wording may the poem more enjoyable and brought it more beauty.

Beautifully penned sad love poem. I think the last line would flow better if it read she will instead of she'll but either way it was an EXCELLENT job. 50/5!

This was a great read full of love and lost hope loved it 5/5 :))

That was a great poem, even though it was a bit sad.

COMMENT # 1 (triolet poetry contest)

AWWW i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem..the idea of it is spectacular.. the word choice is great and it really tells a story.. the ending was predictable but still perfect.. flawless piece ! :D

OMG!!! Those last two stanza were like tear-jerking....I literally teared up! They were worded beautifully and everything was just.......ugh amazing! Great job! :) 5/5 for sure!!!!
~Midnight Sun

I love it. The flow was excellent. You are a great poet. Good job 5/5

FINAL COMMENT (8)

the first stanza is a little to much like conversation not written very poeticallly but everything stanza after that if WONDERFUL.. :)

i love the idea of being with someone else but living in memories of the one you love... ... well i dont love the idea liek for me personally lol... but its a clever touch to the poem... this was written with great emotion and vivid descriptions.. keep up the spectacular work

Wow you have a real gift!

thanks for the comments! you are a really good poet :] xx

This is a good poem, seems like there is alot of heart into this.
Albert

Your words are beautiful. I'm shocked that every poem I open of yours I fall in love with it. That doesnt happen to often for me. i dont add everyone to my favorites but u are a deffinite. Your work leaves me wanting to read them all which would take a while but would b time well spent.
a fan of ur work
<3
L.C

Why I haven`t read this before I do not know and why it isn`t rated a 5.0 boggles my mind ! This, in my opinion, is amazing. You write from the heart, and you write flawlessly, never underestimate your work, Dear.

"I'll watch a love meant for us
Grow with someone else.
I'll put my feelings back upon
Their too familiar shelf."

^^ WOW ! AMAZING.

5.5
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This poem explains a lot about what I'm going through right now and it means a lot to read it ;)
I loved it, I thought it was perfect with rhyming and rhythm.
Perfect :)