This was really good, i remember reading your poems when i first got on here and you were really good... wonderful job! 5/5

Wow. definitely an intense piece of poetry right here. 5/5, without a doubt. I especially liked

I'm fighting so hard
But the voices won't quit
I don't want to believe them
But i'm starting to submit

not only because of the good rhythm and diction there, but because of how that could be viewed in many ways...as could this poem. it could be looked it as just one person going insane, it could be the harsh words of their peers, or it could be someone spiraling into depression, and these are their thoughts.

Very well done. Definitely one of the betters ones I've read.

Keep it up. I'll be keeping an eye on you

This was a really nice poem!
love the darkness u put in it...
and the details that u wrote as well...
keep it up!

Actually i got that feeling generally,i don't hear voices i thank god for that but i have a feeling something around me,cos i saw it,anyway i'm getting out of subject,i mean you really expressed it well,keep it up honey

Now this poem is much better. I like your poems rhyming. They seem to have alot more meaning. The flow was really good, and the picture could be painted. 5/5

Great job! Keep writing. Take Care Cindy

This is a really good.

I really liked this poem so i made it one of my favorite

Wow....really powerful piece...Darkness

Loved it.

Jay

5/5

Wow...another excellent poem from you.. i really like it.... 5/5 from me..its well deserved...

oh by the way ..i think im gonna add you to my favorites..=] keep it up.