Oh that was so sad and its a shame that some woman actually go through this.

WOW i know that feelign that was such powerfulk imagery..amazing stuf.. WOW you're an excellent writter i have sum poems lie htis YOUR F*D UP BARBIE, ANOTHER ROUND, SUICIDAL ROMANCE and SOMEBODY PLEASE LOVE HER..check em out i think you'll really enjoy them. again awesome jobb.

melissa

Wow this poem was very poeweful i loved the emotion in it it was written very vividly and i could see the whole thing in my head, i know what its like to be abused so i could sort of relate to your poem i loved it and i thought it was excelent 5/5!

WOW!! I LOVED the poem. I couldnt take my eyes off the screan. I felt all of the emotion you have put into it.
WOW. a wonderful poem with lots of emotion. 5/5. you are a very talented poet. keep up the work.

Kalee

Awh so sad=[
but lovely writing and lovely poem!
you are such an amazing writer..never stop writing!

This is also a very powerful poem and you should really think about submiting it somewhere such as a place for abused women or something. You never know I really think this poem can help alot of people.