Beautiful poem! I enjoyed this poem! :)

I feel the same way to my ex in this two lines

You know its true, that no matter what I do,
I'll wait for an eternity just to be with you.

TC

God i love this poem!! it's really good!!

Wow. this is amazing.

LOVE IT!!!!!! It is so beautiful..... WOW!!!

Hewow u!! I just wanna say that your poems are great.But this one I like the most.Keep on the good work and take care of you !! *hugs* xxx

Comment #7:
Ok that is so not fair! Your write to get out of writer's block is better than many of my best love poems! lol! (*trying not to be envious*) ;)! This is beautiful to me. And I loved the line -
Your beautiful eyes, twinkle like the stars in this black sky, -
To me that says that her eyes stand out of the crowd. You notice the stars because of the contrast between them and the rest of the sky. So there's obviously a difference between her eyes and everyone elses. Great job! 5/5 FOR SURE!
~Midnight Sun

Writers block where? I love the deliverence~

I luvvv it!!! its so cuute! =]

I think your poem was nice!

Beautiful poem i kno wat you mean
keep up the great writing
i wouldn't have ever known you had writer block when you wrote this poem

Nice poem =)

Wow that was really good! i like how its in little parts! but im weird so ya lol! but i really like it its great! keep up the good work:)