Hey Kia, you commented me ages ago and i never returned the favor! I like this poem, very passionate. AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE

Greta xx

This is a good poem. The part,
"And remember your kiss upon my lips
As they slowly turn blue."
is very well written.
keep it up
peace
soffe

Hey hun...

I really like this poem, it is much shorter than your usual work, but still as much information and feeling as any other piece you do. I really cant get my head around your poetic ability, it facinates and astounds me.

**when in reality my eyes will never live to see another dry day
Nor will my heart stick to the glue you repaired it with**

Loved this part.

Luv ya hun, Mwah!