War (song)

by hiddenimage   Feb 12, 2007


Fears draws attention
Crawling in the door
Hiding in the smallest quakes
Something we can no longer ignore

People crying
People going
People leaving for the war

People hurting
People praying
Why can't we get along any more?

Questions asked
Answers untold
We don't really know
Tears keep falling from the sky
Cause our sisters and brothers have to go

People crying
People going
People leaving for the war

People hurting
People praying
Why can't we get along any more

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  • 17 years ago

    by hiddenimage

    Thank u very much. ive written more to it but i have yet to add it on the computer.lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I loved this 1..the way u've questioned is great....it's better the way it is....beautiful!
    Kp writing!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Great song. It was flawless. Not much that I can say.......

    Sorry for the short comment.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by hiddenimage

    Thank u. i will definatly try and make it longer. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    I really liked this poem!
    Its well written and i liked the way u asked the questions .. and the repition of stanza !
    But i think you should make it a bit longer !
    Otherwise it was great ^_^ i enjoyed it!

    Keep Smiling xx

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