by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup Feb 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
If I had a dieing wish |
Your title got my attention which is the best way of getting people to read your stuff in my opinion. |
I liked this one..its short, yet meaningful, nice job. :) |
Definitly my favorite so far.. the emotion was greater in this poem than any of your others and the flow is nice.. the impact is strong because you repeat "if i had a dieing wish" |