If i had a dieing wish

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Feb 12, 2007


If I had a dieing wish
Id wish for you to be shielded from this
I don’t want you to see
I had troubles
Bad things for me

If I had a dieing wish
Id wish for this to end
I don’t want to go
But the pain wont let me free

If I had a dieing wish
Id wish this wish today
Don’t let my absence throw you off
From your long yet perfect day

If I had a dieing wish

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  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Your title got my attention which is the best way of getting people to read your stuff in my opinion.

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by David Marshall

    I liked this one..its short, yet meaningful, nice job. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Definitly my favorite so far.. the emotion was greater in this poem than any of your others and the flow is nice.. the impact is strong because you repeat "if i had a dieing wish"

    you may want to edit it though because some words are comming out funny like this

    "I donâ??t want you to see"

    ^^ see what i mean.. it happens to my poems sometimes too