There were a lot of emotions in this poem. Form the beginning it sounded like there was hope, but as I read further along, I could see that there was none.

The only thing that I would have to improve was this specific line,

Neither could I because you're the only one who made my heart melt

it was too wordy and threw off the flow of the poem.
other than that.
great job!
5/5

Dat sht was gud ma cuz i can relate 2 u alot cuz niggaz r full of sht but keep ur head up