by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa Feb 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My last wish, |
by Laurenf7
This is a really good poem |
I liked it, I thought it was sad and yeah it was strong, even know you probably didn't know it when you were writing it, the wishes really show that out, and because your wishes are so conciderate and loving and are so desperate, it holds such a strong power of the readers. And I for one was held over... |
by claire
Thats so emotional and honest - sorry about your grandpa. this is seriously strong writing :) |